We have always been there for each other
Always working for something better
Through all the struggles and hardships we have always persevered
I’ve learned so much from you and I hope I’ve taught you something
Because blood doesn’t determine family
We are brothers and I don’t turn my back on family
I live for my friends… for you
Now you must choose to live for me
For my sake for my well being
Seriously without you who would tell me to shut the f*** up when I bitch about stupid shit
We are different from other friends because we do have an understanding
And no one will take that from us
And I won’t let you take it either
Never forget the past it made you who you are
Don’t look to far ahead because you lose sight of what’s right in front of you
Never stop fighting because little victories lead to bigger ones and with that you can win the war
that was good..
ReplyDeleteyou should add imagery and more description.
i liked it......
I think you could add a little more detail
ReplyDeletebut otherwise its good.
i liked it
I liked it. I think you could add a little more imagery if you wanted add more. You don't need to necessarily though.
ReplyDeleteyou dont need to add any more or less. i really liked it you get the full meaning
ReplyDeletemakes me think of people i know like that.
but yes just a little more imagery but i like it a lot.